Reality Comments

Dear poet, I have only this much to say. Please take care of spelling mistakes and faulty constructions. Read enough poetry. brakng, you frees, cintrol, fiting, perminet - etc. These days you get software for spell checks and kindly install one. Grammar is something we can learn lifelong. Wish you all best of luck.

Congrats for the honours of the POSTS. A nice poem.

I think this poem clarifies how creative you are. I enjoyed it. I enjoy trying to analyze my own dreams. So bravo to you, and Good luck.

Sometimes it's nice that a dream was just a dream and not real; other times we really wish that it was real!

Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day as also for inking such a realistic poem.

A cursory attempt to distinguish between the two contrasting words-dream and reality is opined by the poet. Reality is however skilfully unveiled through the events happening in the poem. Good attempt! Sylva-Onyema UUba.

The different situations of human life in the poem interesting.

Ups and downs in life, aren't strangers. Dreams too can be equally tossing or soothing minds. All of them are realities one can not run away from. Quite sensational thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.

Reminds me of the song REALITY popularized by RICHARD SANDERSON+++++++++ congrats, Djean, on being chosen for the day+++++++++++++

To sleep and dream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Well versed. Gives the reader the heartaches and headaches it can bring when you're unemployed with a family relying on you to put food on the table. Well done!