Concious is my world
Yet everything I see
Dwells in that part
That always is
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Wow! The theme of this poem is really interesting and above all, it is original, the way you convey your message is very good. The messasge is poetic and to the poinit. Best regards from one writer to another.
Really enjoyed your poem it is wonderful! I love its 'patter' and your theme is interesting. Please write more!
Really Interesting: Reality x Past x Future ~ Believing only on your vision trapping the mind into a restless reality :) - Truth is I can relate to that very much so...since a little girl...However, I am growing up :) So I rest on accepting not to understand EVERYTHING :)