Monday, July 4, 2005

Reality Comments

Rating: 4.3

Concious is my world
Yet everything I see
Dwells in that part
That always is
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Egal Bohen
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Blue angel Florida 23 August 2007

Really Interesting: Reality x Past x Future ~ Believing only on your vision trapping the mind into a restless reality :) - Truth is I can relate to that very much so...since a little girl...However, I am growing up :) So I rest on accepting not to understand EVERYTHING :)

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Emmanuel Ayala 17 February 2006

Wow! The theme of this poem is really interesting and above all, it is original, the way you convey your message is very good. The messasge is poetic and to the poinit. Best regards from one writer to another.

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Gillian.E. Shaw 05 July 2005

Really enjoyed your poem it is wonderful! I love its 'patter' and your theme is interesting. Please write more!

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