Monday, December 5, 2016

Realisticly Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were realistic, i'd acknowledge all i felt. If
i were realistic, I would see the whole deal. If i
were realistic, I'd know just how the cards are dealt.
The rays of sun would not be felt.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Sandra Feldman 06 December 2016

Fantasy, fantasy, fantasy How you glow in the heart of the dreamer, Opening new frontiers, Wiping away, Realism's tears. For you, dear poet, Rebecca This is what your wonderful poem inspired in me. Your poem is truly Fantastic! Loved it.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 December 2016

Thank You! Sandra, For Being So Kind! Love Your Beautifully Touching For All Writings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 06 December 2016

That proves realism sucks. Be optimistic! Be a dreamer! See that glass half full! At least there will be happiness before the door slams shut. Well written poem with perfect images, my dear Rebecca. 10

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Rebecca Navarre 27 December 2016

Thank You! Susan, For Being So Kind! I've Always Loved Your Wonderfully Beautiful Writings! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 27 December 2016

p/s, Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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