Realistic Fantasy, Or Fantastic Reality? Poem by Anne Rhitak

thoughts provoking...thanks! ! ! great job.

behind the words you wrote there is a divine fanatsy of strong emotions...Appluse i give thou

I also think it is fantastic...most regualr people may not understand what your saying with this, but the poetry community does again GREAT JOB! ! ! :) also feel free to read anfd comment (good or bad) on any of my poems....look for poems by poets name and enter Helen Williamson thanks :)

its delightful you should turn it into a song i reckon it would be rad.

Wow what a fantastic write it reminds me of a poem I wrote long ago 'An Imaginary reality' U know I think I'll post it and it's all because of you. Thanks for that poem it showed great imagination and I can relate to it a lot. Usually I like rhyming poems but I can make this an exception. Thank you and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

wonderful poem..a nice introspection write...10 Ency Bearis

time doesnt stop, the world continue to change, but you can only be satisfied by a fantasy.. good or bad? we live life fearing death is why we continue to live. we live life seeking pleasure is what makes life worthwile to live in. if we were not to fear death and can create pleasure from a speck of imagination, no human will perish without a smile on their faces, but again no human would strive to stay alive

this is a well writ poem and deserves consideration. I would crave the ability of coming as close to the goal as this poem. Let me add that poetry to me is the round-about method of self realization. We attempt in our despair to write a world that isn't there. And when we write this world to be we find a world that's kind of me.

Wow! Awesome imagery. Very good stuff. Every line had a certain weight to it...very good.

Both are true...profound, thanks for sharing