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ohh from the ghost perspective so wonderful I loved it...sad and had me crying.

very touching. i liked it a lot.

Your love is your inseparable feelings on this poem! ! ! It can it can save you and heal you! ! ! Beautiful

Good job! inspired writing.loved it!

Love lives forever. Death s not at all the end..

Simply fabulous. I like it a lot

Wow, that is so sad, but no matter what love always remains even after death! I love how you wrote this poem, so different than all the others speaking from the grave or as a spirit trying still to reach out to your loved one! Loved it, thank you for sharing this amazing and wonderful poem even though it bout brought tears to my eyes! Now you know that is good! :)

I envisioned this poem perfectly! It is also very touching, great work.

Ah! so nice expression. Death separates can't separate love, the desire to touch one's beloved remains the same.

A really different thought, a person lying in the grave trying to view his lover..wants to touch and feel, but never succeeds realizing that he is a dead person. Hats off! !

The poem solicits that lover may die but not the love. Love makes a cadaver alive. Unconditional love live in heaven earth and Netherworld. Dear poet you might have realized that you are dead and cold and remain silent but the message remains alive and fresh which is revitalizing the all the cadaver died because of starvation of love and making them fell and immerse into their love. Come let us colonize more colony of such immortal love so that even a cadaver may fell that his love is immortal Who is blessed with love he is immortal.

This is great, so original, poignant with such raw honesty. Brilliant write! !

Just like the Shakespearean hero who is no more is stronger than the alive one the entity of the dead man is quite remarkable here. At the same time the poem reminds one of P.B.Shelley who wrote ' ADONOIS lamenting over the demise of John Keats. Excellent imagery clothed in superb lines too dear poet.

A very touching poet. A dead man thinking about the loved one he has left behind.

A very touching poet. A dead man thinking about the loved one he has left behind.

very romantic.............great imagery..........................marvellous write...beautifully composed with all emotions embedded in it :)

very nice poems beautifully written. i enjoyed. :)

Awesome.. the cry of a dead man, seeking to feel his loved lady..all in vain.. beautiful thought and imagery. Simple, touching and marvellous write.

How very romantic. A nice write. Enjoyed it.

How very romantic. A nice write. Enjoyed it