Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.
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But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need. beautiful lines of the real woman who is love in person. thank you very much for this poem. love reading it..... dev
Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.
They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you....
Very beautiful concept, and rather truthful, I think. I like this.
Yes life of has been changed and women and men has been transformed. There is truth in your words that physical beauty is not only treasure but let us measure the hearts of the Ladies........ Yet now ladies altered they only need wealth of the man but not his health... A sordid saga of life which is strife...... But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. Nevertheless, Well said Kate, I honor your words! Kudos!
But if you look for trust and real love, Don`t find your heart among the paper walls, --That's right!
well said young person, women are the angel of the universe and to see and reead that make it a fact...women are a roar from deep within man's core...thanks for sharing your mind...I loved it from within me...and I smiled to myself...
I do not have to vote here. It is clear, you are a wonderful poet and you do well with the language also. OK English is not my native either, so I can see the beauty of your work.
Really a nice imagination and the expression with a rhyme......... a very good poem.
Great poem. I like rhythm and rhyme and how you describe the Real Woman and the angels at the end...I like this kind of woman...bravo :)))
Reality is nothing when you die, So, why we always cry about time? All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly, They often speak to our nature prime. AN EXQUISITE PIECE OF POETRY WITH A STYLE, THE STRUCTURES OF THE VERSES AND THE PACE OF THINKING ARE PRAISE WORTHY INDEED.PLEASE CARRY ON AND LIVE UP WITH ALL THOSE, YOU SPRANG OUT AS A WONDER POETESS, A LOT OF PRAISE TO THEE AND YOUR POETIC QUALITY.
All women like gold stars in mystic sky, But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, And give the love that you forever need. love women, care and concern, the woman in the street... nice view of life and love..... you play with contrasts in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony
thanks a lot) for your time