Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Real Women Comments

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Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2017

All women like gold stars in mystic sky, But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, And give the love that you forever need. love women, care and concern, the woman in the street... nice view of life and love..... you play with contrasts in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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thanks a lot) for your time

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Dev Anand 14 April 2016

But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need. beautiful lines of the real woman who is love in person. thank you very much for this poem. love reading it..... dev

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thank you for your time) and comments

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Chinedu Dike 04 August 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2012

They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you....

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 March 2012

Superb poem Ekaterina, absolutely wonderful......

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Kasandra Kerfont 10 March 2012

Very beautiful concept, and rather truthful, I think. I like this.

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Pheko Motaung 10 March 2012

A marvelous poem! Thank you very much.

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Harindhar Reddy 09 March 2012

Yes life of has been changed and women and men has been transformed. There is truth in your words that physical beauty is not only treasure but let us measure the hearts of the Ladies........ Yet now ladies altered they only need wealth of the man but not his health... A sordid saga of life which is strife...... But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. Nevertheless, Well said Kate, I honor your words! Kudos!

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Gordon Tseng 08 March 2012

But if you look for trust and real love, Don`t find your heart among the paper walls, --That's right!

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Eric Cockrell 07 March 2012

each woman, a universe in herself! good one.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 07 March 2012

well said young person, women are the angel of the universe and to see and reead that make it a fact...women are a roar from deep within man's core...thanks for sharing your mind...I loved it from within me...and I smiled to myself...

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 07 March 2012

I do not have to vote here. It is clear, you are a wonderful poet and you do well with the language also. OK English is not my native either, so I can see the beauty of your work.

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Binish Cd 07 March 2012

Really a nice imagination and the expression with a rhyme......... a very good poem.

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Great poem. I like rhythm and rhyme and how you describe the Real Woman and the angels at the end...I like this kind of woman...bravo :)))

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Wahab Abdul 06 March 2012

Reality is nothing when you die, So, why we always cry about time? All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly, They often speak to our nature prime. AN EXQUISITE PIECE OF POETRY WITH A STYLE, THE STRUCTURES OF THE VERSES AND THE PACE OF THINKING ARE PRAISE WORTHY INDEED.PLEASE CARRY ON AND LIVE UP WITH ALL THOSE, YOU SPRANG OUT AS A WONDER POETESS, A LOT OF PRAISE TO THEE AND YOUR POETIC QUALITY.

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