Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Real Woman Comments

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You are not real to me; I don't think
you ever were.

You weren't real in the cold October
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Jack Turner
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Randy Bolante 26 November 2008

I like the idea of writing a poem about someone who is real, yet the way you write at her as if she does not exist at all. Most pretty lines that marked this poem for me except those last four lines: 'You are no more real now as then Or as the darling dreams of youth.' Good luck Turner, well hope you'll also gonna try to see my few poems. Thanks

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