Real Shine Comments
For the first time I felt
About the real fragrance and smelt
The wind facilitated in my favor
It was heavenly sent and honor
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Poet Drit Collins and Shujat Ahmad like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1
Too many cut pharses Kenneth White7 minutes ago I became part of beautiful place is just one example. Forcing meter by dicing up a line is an unpleasant sacrifice and halts the readers attention when they try to make sense of these Yoda sentences. Other than that this maintains beautiful imagery, I meerly suggest a rewrite, adjusting for whole statements
The essence is pure Tracy Bollinger2 minutes ago Caught the spontaneity of your feelings. Delicious joy. Your emotion explodes the language. You cross a lot of barriers.
Very good Anthony Davis2 minutes ago Now this one I like much better than arrogance spoils which more of an essay than a poem. Comment +1
Love Christine A3 minutes ago This poem was full of so much love!
it's actually rly good 14 minutes ago by Calamitee ZzZzZz (Cuz They be sleeping on Me) to Real shine
For the first time I felt About the real fragrance and smelt
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