Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, February 22, 2014

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I may not define
My real world to shine
In public eye
With glorious try
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

Classic Samuel Ajayi15 minutes ago This is one kind of a very fine poem. i love the simplicity, originality and the rhymes arrangement. Each verse tells its own uniqueness and I felt like reading it all over again, every time I finish reading it. Good work sir. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago even you remove one or two stanzas, its spirit may remain same

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

welcome Rohani Daud and Greg Firmstone like this.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2014

lots of smiling offer sir. good writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

I may not define My real world to shine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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