Real Presence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Presence

Rating: 5.0


I may not define
My real world to shine
In public eye
With glorious try

I shall stay silent
With completely absent
From pomp and show
But stay as ordinary as possible to go

That shall grant me
Some moments free
To feel lonely but at liberty
With full freedom to simplicity

I have remained alive
Fully to the situation to relive
With honesty and sincerity
With open prayers to almighty

It is nice to feel open
With heart and mind to feel one
Nothing to hide and nothing seek
That makes you feel strong instead weak

Why should reveal my simple living?
What do I feel in mind by giving?
Simple joy if someone wants
I shall be willing if someone demands

It is as good as giving free pass
To enter in life and show real class
Prove worth to be friend or companion
Worthy to stand for and offer for union

I had been romantic writer
With lots of smiling offers
So many accepted but proved false
I want someone’s real presence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

Classic Samuel Ajayi15 minutes ago This is one kind of a very fine poem. i love the simplicity, originality and the rhymes arrangement. Each verse tells its own uniqueness and I felt like reading it all over again, every time I finish reading it. Good work sir. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago even you remove one or two stanzas, its spirit may remain same

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

welcome Rohani Daud and Greg Firmstone like this.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2014

lots of smiling offer sir. good writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

I may not define My real world to shine

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