Khadim Hussain

Khadim Hussain

Lunger Pur Baly, Jhellum, Pakistan
Saturday, June 30, 2007

Real Man’s Curry Comments

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When I go for a curry
I always have a phal;
Man’s curry
Because I’m a real man
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Joseph Daly 01 July 2007

Excellent Khadim. I love the way in which you have constructed this. The flow is brilliant and reminds me a bit of Jefferson. The culture theme is really made everyman here, the humour of the final stanza is excellently handled. A real pleasure!

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Khadim Hussain

Khadim Hussain

Lunger Pur Baly, Jhellum, Pakistan
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