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Beauty of my garden shows me that real life is free,
its colour calls out please, please stop to look at me.
I hear the wind rush through the shrubs and trees, my
music playing soft, a robins song, all sounds of silence.
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Bob, I see your soul shine through this lovely poem. you said it ' real life is free' andI couldn't agree more. today only after heavy showers at night when i went for a walk, I felt just as you have described. thanks Bob for this wonderful reminder. , Mamta
the poem of many splendour of joy.most beautiful write about man and his need for tranquility and quiet, to rejuvenate him and transfer him to a higher plane for self realisation.bob, the poem is very sweet, yet has a message for all.great write! ritty
You are a master of imagery I could almost hear the music! 10+++
You are a contended and happy man Bob. You have packed this poem with picturesque images and your love of nature shines through. Things you see, many others cannot, and this is your gift, to perceive harmony and beauty and relate it to others in a magnificent poem like this. 10 Karin Anderson
'I am sure real life is free' - as they say in America 'You had better believe it! ' Thanks for sharing your garden and your peace. Read my 'Oasis'-preferably in your garden! . If its magpies you want I a will send you three for good luck. I have a surplus of them around my house and wood! Your poem is rich in description and therapautic in its message.
a true write on real life........we have to immensely get the joyous imbibed in us........... thank you for yur kind sharing.
This is the way to achieve a better way of life. Relax be still, no thoughts of what life was, or wanting feelings for a future happy life. The now is now and now is all the life we have, so enjoy and do not grasp this moment, but just live each moment as they come.......................Wonderful Lines..........Think not of morrow for morrow will take care of itself................Christ...........Good Write...
And yet how rich you are to be so in tune with the music of the spheres. May the invaluable gifts of peace and contentment always be yours. And may your muse never desert you. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra
Bob, there is life in peace.and only if we listen to our hearts.Words of wisdom you beautifully shared here with us, words of love gently flows into my heart, as your character shows what a beautiful person God created in you.I am so blessed i have found you...and now i can truly say..that real life is free..thanks for this great and divine insight. Hugs from here, Meggie
Vert true that no time to stand & stare at the beauties of nature.......A very beautiful poem. U get 10++.........
Ammmmmazing metaphysical poem! significant thoughts fine imagery! 10++++++
Defining the life with all its merits and demerits. Yes! Nature/God had given everything to us. But our greed is driving us towards unlimited vague/psudo pleasures........This poem is so exhaustic, so complete and ofcourse so compelling.........
lovely- lot of Zen philosophy- live in the moment, don't grasp it. great imagery. a poem after my heart. please read Laughter is still the best medicine.
A wonderful nature poem with beautiful word painting &apt use of Onamatopoeia.
Such intimate writing-though I live thousands of miles away, I felt like I was right there with you having a conversation. Excellent work.
This is a beautiful reflection Bob. A piece describing the beauty which makes for true peace. As you bring out it is really free and for the taking to those who see. Thank you for an unforgettable scene amid a land that otherwise we, most of us at least, would never experience. Best wishes Fay.
You have found a beauteous peace within yourself allowing you the freedom to see the value of all about and, through this work, shared. Real life is indeed free but there shall always be a bill presented after lunch.
Bob this is a wonderful poem. There is so much said here that I will read it again and again lest I missed something the first time around. Ron
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THIS MATERIALISTIC WORLD AND OUR GREED HAS MADE US BLIND TO THE BEAUTY OF THINGS AROUND! THE FULL MOON NIGHT, THE NIGHT SKY, THE RAINBOW, THE FLOWERS, -MUSIC AND POETRY! HERE THERE IS A CRAZE FOR IMPORTED THINGS! IT BECOMES MORE ATTRACTIVE THE COSTLIER IT IS! ! 10 + Yes I have heard Garner's and Brubeck's piano play, they are simply great I must say! - Raj