Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, April 14, 2014

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I ventured to find out happiness
I found no reason to convince
What does it mean to offer?
Many friends replied and differed
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Good Sarah Jade10 minutes ago Your poem has a lot of feeling, I love it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Full of wisdom Faheem Jawaid8 minutes ago The last line is very meaningful - the end result. Great read Hasmukh. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Lawng Victoria Spark10 minutes ago Too long, sorry.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

I like it Stephanie Celusta9 minutes ago I like this poem. I get the meaning of it and it really hits home. I think it would have been written a little better but overall it was great. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

I ventured to find out happiness I found no reason to convince

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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