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I believe we've all heard the phrase ''pretty because poetic' and this poem is a perfect example of that. Morose saturnine and even alittle twisted, it all seems dark and desperate but it is more striking as beautiful. (Pretty because poetic)

To hide our feelings like this is a common thing, you've expressed this very well Tyease....you capture the feeling brilliantly...keep expressing my lovely, it helps

I really like this poem, although I may have to read it a couple of times before I fully understand but really it is very good.