Life can bring living hell
If you do not synchronize well
You may call yourself master of destiny
But then also depends on the wishes of almighty
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anchors are what the ship needs to stay in place in the middle of a raging sea of destiny! Richard Stephan4 minutes ago Life and the reason for being alive need analysis and evaluation, to come to the responsible point of view of the sailor at raging sea without a lifeboat and only one paddle! Great poem Hasmukh Mehta...you hit the nail on the head.....wives and husbands are in deep and must lead themselves out of the darkness! Let the light shine! ; -) Rico Comment +1
Excellent Piusha Singh7 minutes ago Excellent write Hasmukh ji, well said I belong to him as he resides in me and me in him.
Good Helvi Salminen2 minutes ago Like a guidebook for life. Comment +1
ok M. Smith5 minutes ago AN ok poem for me......very choppy and not a smooth read for the reader. Good thoughts and material here just needs to be smoother and more crisp rhyme scheme, in my humble opinion. Thanks for sharing!
Life can bring living hell If you do not synchronize well
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