Wednesday, January 20, 2021

Real American Democracy Comments

Rating: 4.5

Make America Great again
By cleaning the lakes and rivers
And stop poisoning the land
Let's stop this division between of everything
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2022

Excellent poem most magnificent, super words rendered here, your Best Poem, dear LeeAnn! 5 Stars TOP Score and myriad more!

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Kevin Patrick 01 September 2021

I had to reread this again, in light of the withdrawal of Afghanistan, its message still resonates and will for years. Bravo

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 August 2021

Nice work! Beautiful! Beautifully composed...Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

Liked the closure lines. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

A powerful and meaningful poem. Great message to all.

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Michael J Williams 10 May 2021

I agree and I like your message. Amen

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Kevin Patrick 08 February 2021

A great critique of America's social and political problems. It's a precise indictment of everything wrong. Great work!

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Richard Wlodarski 22 January 2021

Great visionary poem, LeeAnn! Let's pray that President Biden gets closer to your vision!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2021

A prudent write! Appreciated the spirit of this poem.5 stars

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 January 2021

Your wonderfully crafted poem is truly a blueprint for America's path to greatness. Thanks for sharing.

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Keith Brown 21 January 2021

Utopia! Don't hold your breath, don't try to be perfect, just better than yesterday.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow great fair visions and wishes for your country that all should have for their own countries. No country should have moee right to weapons. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled ' mini earthquake experiences'

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow a great visionary wishes and pleas that everyone should have for their country, no country is greater than another or more deserving of weapons. Kudos. plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled ' mini earthquake experiences'

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Kostas Lagos 20 January 2021

A vision for America! Good one

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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