Friday, September 25, 2009
Ready Too Give Up! Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Siting on the edge,
Ready to give up
Tears are rolling down,
Thinking of my loved ones,
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~ Jon London ~
25 September 2009
Do you know what....I found this emotion packed poem..could also be a song..it's so well...I like the structure and meaning that you expressed across each line....Heartfelt and honest....but I did hear Rock tune behind the words....great job
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7/19/2025 3:03:52 PM # 1.0.0
good to see you fight back....keep it up