I love and like
When they dislike
My presentation
And raise questions
I silently acknowledge
And feel as if in cage
New bird just starting to fly
I think of one more m try
They are my feelings
I feel proud in evening
When day passes of with joy
I take pen in hand and enjoy
I care for their comments
But remain absent
If pointer comes to my creation
I take not and try for more elevation
It is sort of inner excitement
That makes some movement
To write and explain
What is there in mind to maintain?
I shall flow with my thought
If ever it is caught
For controversy and praise
I shall make no chase
Readers are best judge
They will question and manage
It is our duty to convince
One they show interest or evince
:) Broken Lullabies?49 minutes ago That's the wisest way of thinking :) You're always kind with your reviews and everything you write has some kind of inspiration to it. Nicely said :)
Well said sir ;) 17 minutes ago by DARK ANGEL | Reply
very good perspective view point Susan WallLess than a minute ago I admire your way of seeing things.
good flow Robyn2 minutes ago good writing but I didn't connect emotionally to this poem Comment +1 ..
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is sort of inner excitement....that makes one write and express from mind. So true. Enjoyed reading it.