With a string of woven words
You invite me to follow you
Where are you leading me?
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Well, I followed your words - and I enjoyed it. Last line could maybe do with a bit more passion.
Max - I like this poem, especially the stanza: 'I want to go somewhere'...I feel the same way. I think you are a passionate man who is always searching and exploring life for special experiences. It comes over in your poetry. I do so like that. Poems come from feelings; it is obvious you are a very feeling person/poet.