K-ind weather shows up
A-fter the rain has ended;
I-nto the deep darkness dusk and twilight have faded.
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I like how you structured the poem, that is so awesome You are gifted. Thanks for sharing
Loved reading the words for a while, they are mellow, soft spoken, delicate and beautiful. Love how you arranged this poetical treasure, enjoyed it immensely! Nice even rhythm added to it's dimension considerably! 10+++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn