Thursday, January 22, 2009

Read My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

You ask me to write
My whole life in a poem
My feelings for you in some words
My tormented thoughts in a verse
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Why don’t you look into my eyes? Just once Rachel Ann Butler

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Rani Turton 02 February 2009

When you say you don't write poetry, you put your heart down on paper, the truth of it is in this poem, that is simple and beautiful.

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Anjali Sinha 26 January 2009

I asked to write Your feelings for me in verses of poems On yards of perfumed Papers of love Let not rivers of tears Flow like the Nile No need to look at those teary eyes For if by looking at thine Mine get filled to the brim then how will I see your whole story in one tiny-little glimpse wowwww Kamran so beautiful that you just made me write this for you +++++10 as always anjali

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Nia Riz 22 January 2009

the eyes have it! ...i feel that should be the name of your poem...more apt for this wonderful piece! Nia

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Catrina Heart 22 January 2009

The whole story reveals in the eyes of great love...the window through the soul....simple yet nice...10

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