Thursday, March 13, 2008

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He is an assasin
He creeps wearily hooded in black and covered in murder
He might seem innocuous but infact he is Death itself
I beg you do not go to him, you will have a fear beyond doubt
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Robert Gardner
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Howard Johnson 27 March 2008

A Most strong last line.. thank you for sharing

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David Kowalczyk 13 March 2008

Excellent piece of work. The ending line was particularly effective, in my opinion A small typo did prove somewhat distracting: idpendent rather than 'independent' in the forth line from the end.

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