Saturday, February 21, 2015

Reacting To A Medical Verdict Comments

Rating: 2.5

I came to wish to hear the good
I wish to be free from hospital visits
or from more slicing of the flesh.
But the doctor said, 'Yes, you must
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 February 2015

Your closing line comes from the pen of a Warrior true, and a person of providence and faith...Very impressive piece of work, and mellifluously structured...Stay as positive as your poetry is skilled, and all and everything is more than possible! Keep that pen pumping! ~FjR~

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