Reactants Comments

Not my kind of poem, I just can't get into this one. But that does not mean it isn't good. Maybe it reaches a different type of person.

3. The chemistry conceit could work, but it isn't handled well. Details. (Side note: The parallel structure of the first three stanzas is off. 'Emotional' and 'physical' are adjectives, made into nouns (which doesn't work, but that's beside the point.) 'Intellect' is a noun. Be consistent.)

I'm starting to have to use my dictionary - this is great. I learn and you teach.