Two little red ants,
With puffs and with pants,
Were climbing a stone,
But one ant was prone,
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this is strong in its pacing, has a nice universal message and the rhymes are a treat. you should inser a comma between 'no' and 'stay' and delet the commas after 'friend' and 'aid' good work, Ernestine.
Jolly and fun. I think our Herbert would like this one, Ernestine. It's the sort of piece of jolly fun that he would write as well (and I mean this as a compliment) . Love, Gina.
From the mind and heart of a wonderful woman. Thank you for this!
This is one of the most charming descriptions of friendship that I have ever read. Mailed it to myself right away and gave it a BIG 10. Scarlett
Oh what a kind message and all from the brilliant hand of Ernestine Northover, Thankyou for this absolute treat, Love Duncan
A most enjoyable poem Ernestine and a lovely insight into the lives of ants. Love, Andy xx