Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Reach Out And Touch Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thunder and lightning outside
And the rain is pouring down
The sky is crying with me
The thunder is me sobbing
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Jean Dament 07 October 2009

The idea of using a pet to show & compare the need of affection we all crave in this poem was very creative & effective. Great job! Ravensong

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