Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Reach Out Comments

Rating: 4.5

I reach my hand out for you
But you're not here anymore
I ask an empty chair for advice
Because thats where you once were
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Rachel Dowd
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

A nice poetic bio. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

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Sandy Player 03 January 2013

It is a difficult situation; life is so stubborn to some. The poem clearly reflects that, especially the repeated phrases; echoes of a lost aid. Every word stings with bitterness yet you still show that it comes from serious emotions not mere flippant remarks. You show that you've been forced to lose so much. All the best, we hope you gain some relief.

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