Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Reach For The Clouds Comments

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A girl and her dreams interrupted,
by a screeching nazi alarm clock.
Three thirty a.m. wake up call-
Death camp hours.
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Robin Bennett
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Ashley Dias 19 July 2012

I love the imageries eg 'Caffeine high- and scattering around......, Kidnapped on the winds-'. Very descriptive poem, creates a sense of urgency/panick with words like, there's the alarm clock, trapped, climb etc. There is also a feeling of loss, dreams interrupted. Good one

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