Thursday, October 29, 2009

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Rating: 3.0

See
her smile;
watch
her think;
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Nikunj Sharma
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Shirow Walker 15 January 2010

I enjoyed this poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 November 2009

This is a lovely piece.

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Marilyn Lott 03 November 2009

Hello Nikunj. I am not acquainted with all the different styles of poetry but I did enjoy this one very much. '10! ' for you my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Anju Addanki 02 November 2009

Its a wonderful one. I notice there is change in the style of u r write but i like this style. good one.

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Indira Babbellapati 31 October 2009

yeah, stars can be touched...whoever said that can't be? it's ur turn now to tell me what a ' waltz wave poem ' is all about!

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Sonya Florentino 29 October 2009

'the stars tonight are dwarfed'...'you says you can't touch stars'.....wow, i love these lines...beautiful poem Nikunj! .......Karin would be proud...

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You have reached your peak with this wonderful Waltz Wave poem Nikunj. Thank you for mentioning me, but you are such a willing writer with vivid ideas. When one writes a Waltz Wave sometimes it feels like a lot of work for so few syllables, but you will find other readers will adore it. So now you have another feather in your cap. Top Marks....love Karin

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 October 2009

lovely..quiet a difficult form..you have done it beautifully with a wonderful coach...it has come out so naturally..and with a wonderful concept

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