See
her smile;
watch
her think;
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Hello Nikunj. I am not acquainted with all the different styles of poetry but I did enjoy this one very much. '10! ' for you my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Its a wonderful one. I notice there is change in the style of u r write but i like this style. good one.
yeah, stars can be touched...whoever said that can't be? it's ur turn now to tell me what a ' waltz wave poem ' is all about!
'the stars tonight are dwarfed'...'you says you can't touch stars'.....wow, i love these lines...beautiful poem Nikunj! .......Karin would be proud...
You have reached your peak with this wonderful Waltz Wave poem Nikunj. Thank you for mentioning me, but you are such a willing writer with vivid ideas. When one writes a Waltz Wave sometimes it feels like a lot of work for so few syllables, but you will find other readers will adore it. So now you have another feather in your cap. Top Marks....love Karin
lovely..quiet a difficult form..you have done it beautifully with a wonderful coach...it has come out so naturally..and with a wonderful concept
I enjoyed this poem.