Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Re-Awakened... Comments

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Re-Awakened...

I've never really had much use
for the concept of hell
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Annette Aitken
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Seamus O Brian 27 January 2017

Very precisely detailed and effectively disturbing imagery, Annette. Perfectly captured visual of thoughts climbing into the puncture wound of the heart. Terrifically executed, Annette. Well done.

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Susan Williams 25 January 2017

Memories of bad times- - I wish I knew the antidote for them. I guess one thing they do is to make us appreciate the good times- - I think I'll go reponder that! ! ! At least they give us fodder for our writing. Good job.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2017

Punture! ! Wound in my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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