Wednesday, January 12, 2022

Razors Winds (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Razors wind wails
Lashing from winters cruel whip
Piercing the silence
Over the pallid fields of
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Kevin Patrick
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David Wood 13 January 2022

Slicing through as the wind often does.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 January 2022

Excellent Tanka Kevin Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2022

I can feel the cruel winter's grip and see the dullness of the field. A brilliant Tanka embellished with wonderful poetic expression and superb imagery.

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Kevin Patrick

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