Saturday, January 31, 2009

Razors Edge _Infidelity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like the pooling of the tides
Brutal waters advance and retreat
Surge of despair pulling you out
Out into murky abyss of pain
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T.James Becker
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Viola Grey 31 January 2009

wow TJ...just like a razor, this slices so cleanly you don't feel the sting until later...fantastic poem

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Tom Balch 31 January 2009

Yes deep and meaningful, nice work,10 Tom

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Dream Catcher 31 January 2009

Gosh TJ, this is a deep powerful poem...great to see you back posting my friend, you've been deeply missed...top 10..*dc* x

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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