Thursday, August 29, 2019

Razor Blade Comments

Rating: 4.0

Radiant as the morning sun, a devious diva
tongue sharp like a razor blade.
Luscious Belle, blazing eyes like the daughter of the gods.
Elegant thighs, exquisite legs she walks like the goddess of the sun.
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Aniruddha Pathak 02 September 2019

Razor blade, emotional outburst, powerful adjectives, but be careful, sharp blade cuts and gives rashes.

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Uche Nwanze 02 September 2019

You can say that again. Caution is the word, thanks for your comments Pathak.

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Kingsley Egbukole 29 August 2019

" Elegant thighs, exquisite legs she walks like the goddess of the sun. Fiery fangs, feisty as a ferocious cat. You don't wanna get burnt by her fire." Beautifully constructed. We need to be careful with beautiful things, even roses have thorns. Please red my poems " Dear Okwey" , Dear Chiaka" , " Love dreams" . Kingsley Egbukole

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Uche Nwanze 30 August 2019

I can't agree less, all that glitters is not gold. Thanks, will do.

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