I love this poem. I hope you don't mind. I did a re-write. I'm still not quite satisfied with it. I tried to resolve your repetition and created one of my own, and I have a line I want to add, but I don't want to change the length. This is a brilliant concept. Great piece. Thanks for sharing.
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I love this poem. I hope you don't mind. I did a re-write. I'm still not quite satisfied with it. I tried to resolve your repetition and created one of my own, and I have a line I want to add, but I don't want to change the length. This is a brilliant concept. Great piece. Thanks for sharing.