Thursday, August 23, 2007

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I opened up to someone last night
(Someone other than you)
I opened up my heart last night
(Speaking the words that aren't true)
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Newo Enec
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Matthew Harrison 19 August 2009

I love this poem. I hope you don't mind. I did a re-write. I'm still not quite satisfied with it. I tried to resolve your repetition and created one of my own, and I have a line I want to add, but I don't want to change the length. This is a brilliant concept. Great piece. Thanks for sharing.

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