Wednesday, January 30, 2019

Rays - Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Sun sends his rays
Some flowers pick up in grace;
The sunflowers they!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 February 2020

The life of a sunflower is the Sun. That is why its flowers are like the shape of the Sun. A lovely poem with compelling imagery.

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2019

Welcome back Kesav....this is really a surprise...yes....they are sunflowers and the great lotuses too....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 January 2019

picking the sun rays in grace. what a fine expressions.. it tells so much about you. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 January 2019

its wonderful writing on SUN and Sunflower // 10+++

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Kostas Lagos 30 January 2019

Great haiku! Love how the words play with each other

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

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