Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Rays Are Planning To Touch Comments

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Rays are rising slowly in East
They are planning to touch us
On the peak of mountains we see
They are ruffling their feathers.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Joseph Anderson 19 October 2020

God instantly sends valuable rays of mercy and happiness for us. Each day is perfect example of it.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 January 2016

A nice metaphoric poem, with all the mastery of Mhakul.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 21 January 2016

A lovely poem just like peace giving....liked it....thank u for sharing :)

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Mj Lemon 21 January 2016

A magnificent work. The metaphor in the first stanza is unforgettable. And the message that each new day offers new life is wisdom to live by. A great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

And live is ever ready. Thanks for sharing.

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Spock The Vegan 19 January 2016

Although the sun has gone down here, your words are enlightening. TFS

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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