Monday, January 7, 2008

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Down at his local Raymond makes a whole lot of noise
His loud voice heard above the din 'boys always will be boys'
He and his mates meet every evening for an hour's drinking or two
And their subjects seldom vary as pub talk seldom do.
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Francis Duggan
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Raymond Uyok 16 October 2011

Raymond here is an interestingly absurd character; I like him that way, my namesake! I love your narrative style. This is a work that showcases a lot of creativity. Please comment on my poems.

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