Sunday, March 23, 2008

Ray Of Lights Comments

Rating: 3.5

As sun shines and brighten our day
we all have ups and down, things to do in many way
there will allways be good and bad times
some of us have a lot of money, some of us have not a dime
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michael neguse
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Greenwolfe 1962 19 June 2008

This poem is far ahead of the other one, so I gave it a seven. This is a just score for this. GW62

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