Friday, May 13, 2005

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I woke up this morning feeling raw and wide open
With my mind spiraling into nevermore
Knowing I will step out the door
Into today's unknown
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Savannah Churchill
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Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

of course every zen master has said just now all there is no other time and to live just be ready to accept everyting a fine poem

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it doesn't do it at all!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 May 2005

You think just spreading yourself wide open, intellectually of course, would do the trick? Your poetry may not quite do it. H

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