Friday, September 15, 2017

Ravishing Beauty Comments

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The leaves are yellow and fallen off
The water is dried and the land has cracked
No more smiles and the beauty is gone
Love has gone and you are dead
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Rini Shibu
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Valsa George 05 March 2018

Let us hope that as the seasons roll by, the bare trees will be clad with lush green leaves, the dried up ponds and rivers will be full of crystalline waters and flowers will nod their heads on meadows and valleys and our Earth will once more restore her ravishing beauty! Though a lament, there is hope at the end!

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks for your encouraging words..! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2017

Once again the golden rays will fall! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thank you so much Edward.. Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2017

After winter the spring will come and the ravishing beauty will be appeared again. Beautifully presented. Thanku u dear Rini for justifying restoration.

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Rini Shibu 16 September 2017

Thanks Kumar for your appreciation..

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Lamar Cole 15 September 2017

This is a very thought invoking poem that is very nice to envision the poet's interpretation.

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Rini Shibu 16 September 2017

Thanks Lam for taking the time to read my poem

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