Ravi Kay Sahil Pe Main Aur Bus Too Comments
Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too,
wuh sondhi sondhi si mtti ki boo,
hathon mein hathon ki narmi bhi thi,
sanson mein sanson ki garmi bhi thi,
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bhaut hi khubsoorat si nazm hain....... bhaut pyari...... grrtt sirji
A light and lyrical composition...nice to see Urdu poetry so encouraged too... thanks for sharing...
Padhte hue rang chaya sa tha Ravi ka paani samaya sa tha Ankhon mein dekh unki mastiyaan ek khumar chaya sa tha.............................Ek behtareen Nazm Janab Akhtar Jawad Saheb ki, Maza Aa gaya.
Ek khoobsoorat aur lajawab nazm..........................
Is nazm me aapne dharti, aaksh, hawa, Ravi ke kinaare pasra sannata aur mitti ki sugandh ke sath sath muhabbat ki ik madhur daastaan badi khoobsurti se piroyi hai. Bahut khoob. Shukriya. thandi thandi hawaon ki mdira madhoo, Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too.
Very beautiful presentation about evening we see in imagery with thoughtful composition. A tender touch of evening open door of emotion. Wisely penned poem shared definitely.10
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7/30/2025 5:34:39 AM # 1.0.0
bahut hi sundar gajal 10+++ awesome.........................