Friday, August 28, 2009

Ravens Cry With No Mercy Comments

Rating: 2.8

ravens cry with no mercy
a bell rings devilishly
the path to nothingness
is awaiting wounded souls
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

I really like this. You've captured something in here that hides from the light and doesn't like to ever come out. Great lines.

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Joseph Poewhit 28 August 2009

There is something about ravens and bells in belfry's

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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