Thursday, January 12, 2023

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They used to walk together
Now they walk alone
their paths twisted and torn
The best year of her life
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Aria Winters
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Amelia Waters 06 April 2023

This is a lovely piece of writing. It really peels back what goes on inside a person's head

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Thomas Case 12 February 2023

The pain is palpable.

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" Now they walk alone their paths twisted and torn"… Now she is a shell".. brilliant, wonderful writing.

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