Monday, October 17, 2011

Ravenous Howl... Comments

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Too far apart!
Disfigured by mar,
Despise astatic ways...
(For florid felicity
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
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George Gilbert 15 February 2012

WoW! ! ! What a knock out punch of reality...yet another to add to my list of favs. Everyone's mantra should be your after thought...

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Max Steiner 21 October 2011

Great poem touching upon the most important spiritual themes as liberation from sin & Satan, a search for a deeper reconciliation with God, and the sufferings we must bear to become stronger in our friendship with God. Dr., impressive stylistic choice! 10!

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Phillip Cushing 20 October 2011

Dr. Kardas, skillfully written poem with deep mystical insights. Symbols as Cross and Ring are synthesizing the victory of our spiritual battle. I read that a few saints received in visions from Christ a ring as a reward and sign of their marriage or complete unity with Him. Once again, another great addition to your unique verse! God be with you - the Cushings

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Roger Guzman 17 October 2011

Hi Dr. Kardas! Glad to see you back! These days one must use a lantern to find poetry of this great calibre! Your insights shoot out like a cannon in the night! How true if we are not awakened to God & serve Him according to His truths, we are basically dead, & at the end find utter misery. I absolutely agree that serious writers must write only about eternal matters or don't bother at all. There is too much rubbish out there, not worth any attention. God bless! Keep them coming! 10! ! !

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