Monday, March 4, 2013

Raven Boy Comments

Rating: 4.5

Raven black as dark
was the first thing that she saw as she looked into his eyes
found a feather in his hair
think maybe he could fly if he takes the weight off of his back
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Tsunami HiroshiSu
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David Wood 21 April 2013

A solidly strong mature poem that was interesting to read. When will we see your next poem?

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Tsunami HiroshiSu

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