Wednesday, November 19, 2008

..Raven Black Comments

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flowers etched in glass
their bloom immortalized,
their frangrance a frozen promise
never tested hence never broken....
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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Fine imagery! chosen words are WOW! Eloquent.............. 10+++

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Wardha it would take a double dose of gullibility to believe that this poem just happened. Its very strong very immersing. Every word is powerful. I understand that the inspiration that brought it to existence was very short-lived but the quakes that it had set in motion goes way beyond the ordinary

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 November 2008

Wardha, It's a beautiful poem with perfect wording. Some lines are really 'paragons of worth'. The last two lines suddenly uplift the poem to a new height of meanings.

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