Ravelling Ugly Monster Comments

Again and again! same effect! Same poet! Topics changes and words change the power of your language and those punch dialogues or expressions will be the same. A another royal display of you talent... My royal prince!

A lot of strong words.Good rhyth, Good reading.An example of good poetry.Thanks.

a great poem but is the monster within your partner or just a reflection of the person himself? ? ? love the poem =D

I am quite sure after re-reading the poem the monster is not a human being. Are you talking in this poem to something more abstract, like carnal desire itself? Whatever it is, it is causing some passionate dislike in you and you describe it with great poetic talent in this poem.

Haha like the end...I really feels like someone is mad of something when i read this..i can feel it :) But my dear friend no monster has good looking why? ? coz monster always referred as ugly by human...not in their community hahaha joking! :) Unwritten Soul

'To slave me in your voluptuous captivation.' I love this line. Magical and passionate. Great stuff here.