Leave me a scar,
a tear, a frown,
leave me the sorrows of your heart,
all your sadness,
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it sounds like you is getting the better deal! ! ! me is getting the short end of the stick! : ( i shy away from love poems, but i'm sure this would excite the hearts and minds of many. and i DO like this EVEN THOUGH IT IS A LOVE POEM! to MyPoemList. thanks. bri :)
The best part of the poem are the concluding four lines: 'We are two broken halves, forged together and then forced apart, we are the night and the day, an end to a beautiful start…' - truly magnificent!