Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Raucous Rhyme Comments

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Travelers gaze the zipping scapes
Vie through nicks an their drapes

Go they ahead but clutch the rear
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Indira Renganathan 18 June 2009

Before I could get to the meaning of your poem its music captures me to doze...what a wonderful write...I easily feel your enjoyment as you string the words...you've a distinct pleasing style...and ofcourse the last two lines are truly sung...salutes to your talent

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