Sunday, May 19, 2013

>Rattle Comments

Rating: 4.8

Something is crawling
Not so quick

not so slowly
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Abdul Wahab
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

A chaos poverty , , , that rattles

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David Wood 21 May 2013

I agree with Diane, we cannot shoot the messinger. Lovely poem.

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Captain Cur 19 May 2013

The gnawing insecurities of man infests us all. We all live in a house of cards. Nicely written, your words created a slow beat to the inevitable fall.

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